Thursday, November 15, 2007

work in progress

i have started up poetry again from when i was a few years younger and i want to get some input on a poem that i wrote because of some very funny circumstances.
anywho... here goes...

Your Friend
I am an arm around your shoulder when you are cold.
I am your voice when you can't be heard.
I am two ears when you need them most.
I am a shoulder to cry on when you are sad.
I am a pillow when you need a nap.
I will laugh when you laugh.
I will cry when you cry.
I am a comforter.
I am a healer.
I will be with you forever.
I am your friend.
and there it is... i would aprecieate comments and critiques.
oh and p.s. Becca, you are a very great inspiration. my mind is open so much more when i am around you and right now just thinking about you...
:)
good night and farewell till next time

2 comments:

Johnny and Becca said...

Grant, I love the poem...I don't think there's anything that you need to change. I'm glad I can be your inspiration. I miss you a lot. :)

Madi + Jared said...

i really like it :) it puts warm fuzzies all over my insides :D and you really are all those things, for becca especially, but your friends too ^_^